KA-KeitorinArtist's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[When I'm Gone]

I like it... But I feel like it needs more. Keep at it!

Evil-Gandalf responds:

Thanks so much for listening and leaving me a review! ^_^ I agree, it is a bit simple and short too. I was trying not to stray far from the original, though, which are these lyrics and a cup for percussion haha

[Relationship Advice]

AWWW. That so mean! I would have kept texting you even if I were gay! (I'm not gay) She way she was rude to you basically meant she wanted to do exactly what she did to you on that night.

biggiek7888 responds:

While I appreciate the kind words, I feel I should just reiterate that it wasn't REALLY me who sent this very strange and warped series of text messages, but rather a nameless fella from reddit. I simply did a dramatic read based off said ridiculousness and added that final part for one last ditch cheap laugh.

[Trust Me (Preview)]

I like what I hear! Good job!

BuggMusic responds:

thanks! :)

[Rookie]

OMG IT LOOPS! O.o

khay8 responds:

Lol yea :D i made this out of some melody i was thinking of. It sounds to me like this was gonna be a part of a song but i dont know what song >.>

[Brotherhood]

It's very... Stagnant... and Harsh, but its sort of like a, techno, slash garage band type of thing. If possible I would try and replace you computer piano with a real sounding like piano, to soften it up in the beginning.

MagnumKlutch responds:

Yes, I agree. It's still in progress so hopefully it will turn out good

[Morning Sky (Kaze no Ne)]

I loved the background... Your voice just doesn't mimic it though. I think you should put more oomph in it. More zeal, excitement. You have this solid beat. Match it and go all out. Pretend your on the stage performing the song. Singers tend to go for quality, not heart, when they record. (which is a shame) But other than that your pitch perfect! :D

VGSongbird responds:

Hmm... I always go for heart above quality. However, I would be lying if I said this song wasn't slightly out of my range. Perhaps that's why it didn't have the "oomph" you were looking for.

Thanks for listening anyways ^_^

[Zelda's Storm OoT]

Wow... Omg... just *bOOOm* Mind blown. This is so heart wrenching, moving, calming, and a ting of sadness filled with nostalgic memories. BOOM might be an understatement. Its quite alright that it is softer than normal, because that makes you turn up the volume to really listen. But this is awesome.

With the intertwining voices I would have raised there key higher and made them softer, but that's just me. Take that advice or leave it. Me don't cares* continues listening while brain combusted*

VGSongbird responds:

I really couldn't raise the key much; I'm an alto voice. It's hard for me to hit super high notes. But I am happy to hear your feedback! Thanks for listening ^_^

[Magic Man From Cyberland]

This is really nice! :D

Digiguy responds:

Thanks!